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To whom it may concern,I want to get some information about accommodation in Istanbul while taking the course. I would appreciate it if you could recommend me a good and safe neighborhood with reasonable prices.Thank you in advance.Best regards,Hamid Najafi

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Hi Hamid, it's pretty good. Go for it

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Hi Hamid;  Almost perfect.  I have made 2 suggestions in ().  I hope this helps, Stephen

To whom it may concern,I want to get some information about accommodation(s) in Istanbul while taking the course. I would appreciate it if you could recommend (to) me a good and safe neighborhood with reasonable prices.Thank you in advance.Best regards,Hamid Najafi

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