Chandra
Haiku I need to know if this follows the rules of a traditional Japanese haiku as well as if it's any good. My Japanese is still very much at a beginning level but it's very important to me that this haiku be in Japanese and it will be read by a fluent Japanese speaker. I have made sure to add a Kigo and a Kireji, mostly I am concerned about if it follows the 5-7-5 rule and if it makes any sense. Thank you for any and all help 寒い冬一緒に愛暖まる
2018년 10월 31일 오전 12:51
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I think it’s correct. I can understand its meaning.
2018년 10월 31일
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