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Please correct my article. many thanks! Dear friends, I am quite delighted to hear the news that you are going to my college soon. I am wirtting to extend my warm welcome and offer several suggestions for your coming campus life in China. Firstly, it is necessary for you to communicate with Chinese classmates, since that is a effective way for you to practise mandarin and speak it fulently. Secondly, you are supposed to take part in campus activities which will provide you a great opportunity to make friends with Chinese guys and have a good understanding of Chinese culture. Finally, if you want, you can search the website of my university online in advance. All in all, I am looking forward to your arrival badly. Hoping all of you will adapt enjoy the life here. Students' Union
2018년 11월 7일 오후 12:48
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upcoming* an* effective way fluently* you can check* the website Hoping you will adapt and enjoy life in here* Overall, great job!x
2018년 11월 7일
I think it's impeccable.
2018년 11월 7일
oh, the last pragraph should be, hoping all of you will adapt and enjoy the campus life here.
2018년 11월 7일
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