Aya
Is this sentence natural?? I’d like to make short speech in front of people. This is third time to see them, so I want to say as below, Good afternoon, everyone. Nice to see you all again. I came back here to return the favor. I’ll keep doing my best. Thank you for your continuous support. Thank you! Is this speech natural? Do you have better way to say?
2019년 10월 3일 오후 1:09
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Each of the sentences is natural, but there are a couple of things you could do to improve it as a speech. 1) Each of the sentence is really short. It would sound a little better if you had at least one longer sentence, for variety. 2) When you say “return the favor,” will the audience know what favor you are talking about? If not, you should explain. 3). When you say “keep doing you best,” will the audience know what you will keep doing your best at? If not, you should explain.
2019년 10월 3일
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