Does it sound natural and grammatical? Any alternatives?
People's Daily just turned a blind eye to the
14 year-old boy who was blasted to his chest by a real bullet and the girl shot to blind as well as so many brutality the police committed.
In that case you can imagine how the Party-owned media behind the Great Firewall bias the ppl with their reports.

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Does it sound natural and grammatical? Any alternatives?
People's Daily just turned a blind eye to the 
14 year-old boy who was blasted to his chest by a real bullet and the girl shot to blind as well as so many brutality the police committed. 
In that case you can imagine how the Party-owned media behind the Great Firewall bias the ppl with their reports.

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And could you correct another sentence for me?

She was one of millions of "Guinea pigs" in the Cultural Revolution experiment "exploring the road of socialism with Chinese characteristics (as was rephrased in Chinese history textbooks)".

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Thank you

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(this suggestions is for English learning purposes) Perhaps...
People's Daily just turned a blind eye to the 14 year-old boy who was shot in the chest by a real bullet and the girl who was blinded by a shot to the head, as well as so much other brutality that the police committed. 
In that case, you can imagine how the Party-owned media behind the Great Firewall bias the ppl with their reports.

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