Could you please correct me?
The most influential people in my life are my family.
I look up to my mom in so many ways.
My mom has shown me dedication and hard work.
She worked as a hair dresser for about 50 years and did everything she needed to do
for my brother and me.
She has always been there to give me a big hug and tell me everything will be alright.
The bad thing about my dad is that he enjoys drinking very much but except that, he has been a good dad.
When I was growing up, he tried to get my brother and me to experience different things.
He would take us to many places such as mountains, museums, amusement parks etc.
My husband has always supported me no matter what I do.
He has also been a good listener.
The last person that influences me is my daughter.
When I need some help she would give me good advice even though she is young.
She would be also a good friend and tries to make me feel better when I’m stressed out.
I think I’m so lucky to have them as a family and I appreciate to them for things that they’ve done for me.
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The last person that has been influential in my life is my daughter.
Whenever I have needed help, she has always given me good advice, even though she is young.
She has also been a good friend and has tried to make me feel better when I'm stressed.
I think I am so lucky to have them as my family, and I appreciate them for the things they have done
for me.
These are the major changes I would make. Good job!
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