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I would like to share you a book recetly I read.The book name's Just Kids.It was written by a famous American singer,Patti Smith.Also she is a morden poet.Another honor,she is the godmother of punk,punk is a type of music.She ever had an excellent performence on Nobel ceremony on behalf of Bob Daylon.That's a classic show.In this book,she talked about a lot of things all of her lifetime.It contained her music,her lover,her friends and some others special experience she ever met.It was fantastic and It impressed me.
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I would like to share with you a book I read recently. The book’s title is ‘Just Kids’ and it was written by a famous American singer named Patti Smith. She is also a modern poet and the godmother of punk. Punk is a type of music. She gave an excellent performance at the Nobel ceremony on behalf of Bob Dylan which was a classic show. In this book she talked about a lot of things throughout her lifetime. It contained her music, lover, friends, and some other special experiences she had. The book was fantastic and it impressed me.
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I would like to share with you a book I recently read. The book’s name is ‘Just Kids’ and it was written by a famous American singer named Patti Smith. She is also a modern poet and the godmother of punk. Punk is a type of music. She had an excellent performance on Nobel ceremony on behalf of Bob Dylon which was a classic show. In this book she talked about a lot of things throughout her lifetime. It contained her music, lover, friends, and some other special experiences she had. The book was fantastic, and it impressed me.
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I would like to share with you a book I recently read. The book's name is 'Just Kids'. It was written by a famous American singer, Patti Smith. She is also a modern poet. Another honor: she is the godmother of Punk. Punk is a type of music. She even had an excellent performance on Nobel ceremony on behalf of Bob Dylon. It was a classic show. In this book she talked about a lot of things throughout her lifetime. It contains her music, lover, friends, and some other special experiences she had. The book was fantastic and impressed me.
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I notice everyone is changing the singer's name to Bob Dylon but I'm pretty sure he spells it "Dylan"
Anyway, good work. Keep it up.
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Thanks.I will do that next time.
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