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Hello. I had a lot of plan this week. There is a plan that I had been looking forward to for a long time. It is a big music festival. The day before, I had school from the morning, After that I had part-time job to 10p.m. Then I walked to home. I was really tired but I had a lot of things to do. One of things is my school assignments! When I finished everything, it was 3a.m. I was really sleepy at that time but I had something that wanted to do. It is fanlight stick decoration. It was very fun and I did well. It finished at 6a.m. I have been awake all time. Then I went to the festival. There a were appeared some my favorite artists. I was really happy to see them. They sang my favorite song! I want to see them again.

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Hello. I had a lot of plans (plural) this week. One plan that I had been looking forward to for a long time was a big music festival. The day before, I had school from the morning, After that I had part-time job to 10p.m. Then I walked home. I was really tired but I had a lot of things to do. One of those things was my school assignments! When I finished everything, it was 3a.m. I was really sleepy at that time but I had something that I wanted to do. It was a fanlight stick decoration. It was great fun and I did well. It finished at 6a.m. I have been awake since then as I then went to the festival. Some of my favourite artists were performing there. I was really happy to see them. They sang my favourite song! I now want to see them again.

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