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Tsujimoto Takeshi
My last trip was a snowboarding trip to Gifu Prefecture. I snowboarded with my friends from morning to night. I was very tired. I ate yakiniku at night and my stomach was full. On the second day, I went to the sauna with my friend. We were in three hours there.
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My last trip was a snowboarding trip to Gifu Prefecture. I snowboarded with my
friends all day. I was very tired. I ate yakiniku at night and was full. On the second day, I went to the sauna with my friend. We stayed there for three hours.
よく書けてますよ!岐阜県でスノボの旅行はすごく楽しそー🏂 いっぱい楽しんでうれしいなあ!
→「from morning to night」は正しい英語ですが、「all day」のほうが自然だと思います!
→「my stomach was full」も合ってますが、「was full」と使ったら、アメリカ人には自然な英語に聞こえます。お腹がいっぱいについて話す時、英語では「stomach」を略すことできます。”お腹”がいっぱいこともう知ってますからね。
無理のない範囲で英語の勉強を頑張ってくださいね♪
2024년 3월 20일
My last trip was a snowboarding trip to Gifu Prefecture. I snowboarded with my friends from morning to night, and at the end of the day I was very tired. I ate yakiniku for dinner and had a full stomach. On the second day, I went to the sauna with my friend and we stayed for three hours.
2024년 3월 20일
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