Alex Domin
I explore a new hobby because I like new experiences. I probe sewing but I realize that I am afraid of needles.
Since I try hard, I do well in high school. I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and classmate.
2024년 2월 6일 오전 9:09
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I always look for a new hobby because I like new experiences. I tried sewing but I realized that I am afraid of needles.
Since I try hard, I do well in high school. I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and a classmate.
2024년 2월 6일
초대받은 사람
I explore a new hobby because I like new experiences. I probe sewing but I
realize that I am afraid of needles. Since I try hard, I do well in high school.
I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and classmate.
Hi, Alex. I’d suggest “try” instead of “probe.” We could also use a conditional “would” here:
I would try sewing, but I realize I’m afraid of needles.
2024년 2월 6일
초대받은 사람
I explored a new hobby because I like new experiences. I tried sewing, but then I realized that I am afraid of needles.
Another thing I'd like to say is that since I always try hard, I do well in high school. But I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and classmates.
2024년 2월 20일
I explore a new hobby because I like new experiences. I probe sewing but I realize that I am afraid of needles.
Since I try hard, I do well in high school. I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and classmate.
hi
2024년 2월 6일
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