The Tim じぁん!!!
It's sunny today. According to our tradition, my dad is supposed to visit my maternal grandparents today. We had a lovely dinner at their home. Personally, I enjoyed their chocolates more than their food. They received a lot of them—many relatives visited and brought chocolates along, which was interesting. I wonder why I didn't receive any! My grandpa is still walking with a limp. I hope he gets better soon.
2024년 2월 11일 오후 3:51
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It's sunny today. According to our tradition, my dad is supposed to visit my maternal grandparents today. We had a lovely dinner at their home. Personally, I enjoyed their chocolates more than their food. They received a lot of them—many relatives visited and brought chocolates along, which was interesting. I wonder why I didn't receive any! My grandpa is still walking with a limp. I hope he gets better soon.
Hope so too.
2024년 2월 11일
1
It's sunny today. According to our tradition, my dad is supposed to visit my maternal grandparents today. We had a lovely dinner at their home. Personally, I enjoyed their chocolates more than their food. They received a lot of them—many relatives visited and brought chocolates along, which was interesting. I wonder why I didn't receive any! My grandpa is still walking with a limp. I hope he gets better soon.
Perfect! No corrections needed. Awesome job! :)
2024년 2월 11일
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