千山皓月
A principal can only stay in bed because of his backache. everything in Japan is low, so he has to bend. I had nothing to say, but only “please have a great rest”.
After hearing that my mother became anxious And pushed me to swim.
2025년 4월 18일 오전 7:45
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A principal can only stay in bed because of his backache. Everything in Japan is low, so he has to bend. I had nothing to say except, "Please have a great rest."
After hearing that, my mother became anxious and encouraged me to swim.
Hi 李梦桐! You did a great job sharing your observations about the principal and how everything in Japan requires bending. I liked how you expressed your concern for him and how your mother encouraged you to swim. To improve, try to clarify your ideas a bit more for better understanding. Keep up the good work!
2025년 4월 20일 오후 10:23
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