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Reny
I think it is very good, because one learns still ; and learn something new at this age is good for the brain and protects against Alzheimer. I want to study at the University of the Third Age when I get older, because I want to be a vital old lady.

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I think it is very good because we should never stop learning. Learning something new at an older age is good for the brain and protects us against developing Alzheimer's. I want to study at the University of The Third Age when I get older because I want to be a vibrant old lady.
Hi Reny, this is great. I love the energy as usual. You can use "vital" at the end like this: "...I want to be a vital part of my community / neighbourhood / work environment." You could also say "...I want to be an energetic old lady."
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I think it is very good, because you can never stop learning and learning something new at that age is good for the brain and prevents you from developing Alzheimer's disease. When I get older in want to study at the University of The Third Age because I want to be a vital part of my community.

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