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The person that I really admire is Manny Pacquiao because he is such an incredible athlete. His discipline and work ethic is so amazing. He never under estimate any of his opponents because every time he trains for a fight he is always focus and intense which is a mark of an athlete who is very dedicated in his sport. Most athletes when they reach the age of 39 they retire, but at the age of 42 Manny can still compete against younger fighters. But what I truly admire about him is his humility. Even if he has already achieved a lot he never forgets where he came from. He is a legend, a future hall of famer, and the people’s champ inside and outside the ring.
2021년 3월 9일 오전 9:49
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The person that I really admire is Manny Pacquiao because he is such an
incredible athlete. His discipline and work ethic is so amazing. He never under
estimates any of his opponents because every time he trains for a fight he is
always focused and intense which is a mark of an athlete who is very dedicated in
his sport. Most athletes retire when they reach the age of 39, but at the
age of 42 Manny can still compete against younger fighters. But what I truly
admire about him is his humility. Even though he has already achieved a lot, he has never
forgotten where he came from. He is a legend, a future hall of famer, and the
people’s champ inside and outside the ring.
Well done, just a few minor changes.
2021년 3월 9일
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