I ussualy before sleep play video games on computer with my best friend. Also I love to read some book before bedtime. After 21h I always turn on dim light.

Disa

2021년 3월 2일 오후 5:37

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before sleeping, I usually play video games on the computer with my best friend. I also love to read before bedtime. After 21h I always turn on dim light.

It's enough to say "read" in English so it's possible to remove "some book".

2021년 3월 3일

Before sleep, I usually play video games on the computer with my best friend. Also I love to read books before bedtime. After 21h, I always turn on dim light.

also could be "my computer" also could be "a book"

2021년 3월 3일

I ussualy play video games on computer with my best friend before I go to sleep. Also, I love to read some book before bedtime. After 21h, I always turn on dim light.

2021년 3월 2일

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