ぽてと
I didn't have any plans today, so I decided to clean my room. In my room, there are a lot of ITZY's goods, so I'm going to organize it.
2025년 4월 20일 오전 3:15
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I didn't have any plans today, so I decided to clean my room. In my room, there are a lot of ITZY goods, so I'm going to organize them.
Hello ぽてと! It sounds like you made great use of your time by cleaning your room! I love that you have a lot of ITZY goods, and organizing them will be fun. To enhance your writing, remember to use the correct pronouns when referring to items. Keep up the good work!
2025년 4월 20일 오후 9:12
I didn't have any plans for today, so I decided to clean my room. In my room, there are a lot of ITZY's goods, so I'm going to sort them out.
2025년 4월 20일 오전 8:15
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