July zhang
I don't want to keep thinking of what it will be like if I did it, so I often push myself further when I am about to give up in most cases. Because I think trying isn't usually a bad thing. Trying can help us learn and to make wiser decisions.
But that is not to say we can't quit, when it comes to danger and risk, we need to evaluate if it worths to stick to, because the price of trying could be anything.
2024년 1월 5일 오전 6:54
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I don't want to keep thinking of what it will be like if I did it, so in most cases, I often
push myself further when I am about to give up. Because I think
trying isn't usually a bad thing. Trying can help us learn and make wiser
decisions. But that is not to say we can't quit. When it comes to danger and
risk, we need to evaluate if it is worth sticking to(worth pursuing) , because the price of trying
could be anything.
or : When an endeavour has an element of danger, we have to weigh the rewards against the risks and consequences.
Well done. Some suggestions but you are still correct. Endeavour is like an attempt to achieve something.
2024년 1월 6일
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