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Noe Calle
The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why? My answer: Education from school means a structured set of knowledge that you need to internalize in order to be part of our laboral market. Having this in mind I do completely agree with the notion of that education from our own families is more essential than from schools. Education from our family in most of the cases refers to a type which belongs to a higher level instead of being a gathering of facts, numbers and so on. This kind of education falls in the field of moral values and even spiritual beliefs which powerfully guide our lives in more profound ways that just our technical knowledge does. The structured education that we receive from school is highly important for society and for our roles in modern life. it allows us to build human culture and to gives it to new generations but the values that consolidate society as a whole are without discussion moral and even spiritual ones. Spiritual and moral values are profound teachings that in many cases we share and learn since our first years from our parents. The way such powerful beliefs impact us determines how we behave towards other people and this behavior ends up building societies or starting wars. In conclussion, I agree that education from our family has a deep impact in us, rather than the so-called education from school and the reason is because spiritual values define our character throughout our lives.
2021년 6월 1일 오후 1:31
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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why? My answer: Education from school means a structured set of knowledge that you need to internalize in order to be part of our laboral market. Keeping this in mind, I do completely agree with the notion that education from our own families is more essential than from schools. Education from our family in most of the cases refers to a type which belongs to a higher level instead of being a gathering of facts, numbers and so on. This kind of education falls in the field of moral values and even spiritual beliefs which powerfully guide our lives in more profound ways that just our technical knowledge does. The structured education that we receive from school is highly important for society and for our roles in modern life. It allows us to build human culture and to gives it to new generations but the values that consolidate society as a whole are without discussion moral and even spiritual ones. Spiritual and moral values are profound teachings that in many cases we share and learn since our first years from our parents. The way such powerful beliefs impact us determines how we behave towards other people and this behavior ends up building societies or starting wars. In conclussion, I agree that education from our family has a deep impact on us, rather than the so-called education from school and the reason is because spiritual values define our character throughout our lives.
First of all wow ! That’s impressive ! And just a small tip, in my opinion “keep in mind” is more common than “have in mind”. While your use for correct according to me, keep would be a better fit as it sounds more Natural. And with the impact you will use “on” us not “in” us. Otherwise great effort 😊
2021년 6월 1일
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