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According to my perspective income and the happiness have a collateral relationship with each other. I am sure that many people have different opinions about this topic, but the economy is a critical thing which has an important effect on an individual’s happiness. In daily life we see many examples about it. For example you want to buy a new cell phone, and you do not have enough money. I am sure that it would affect your emotion negatively, and on the other hand if you had enough money and could buy it, you would be happy. Secondly, you think that you are a father who has two children and you have responsibilities about your family member’s happiness. What would you feel if your children want something and you could not afford it? And it would have a butterfly effect in your family. Someone’s sadness would affect other family members emotions negatively, and you would live in a unhappy family. Lastly, many scholars assert that, some people who have an economical power, have a good health. Their bodies emit sereton who has good impact on their health. So that happiness has a crucial thing which can not be ignored in individual’s happiness.
2021년 6월 9일 오후 6:31
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In to my view, income and the happiness have a collateral relationship. I am sure that many people have different opinions about this topic, but the economy is a critical thing which has an important effect on an individual’s happiness. In our daily life, we see many examples of this. For example, you want to buy a new cell phone and you do not have enough money. I am sure that it would affect your emotion negatively. On the other hand, if you have enough money and can buy it, you would be happy. Secondly, if you are a father who has two children and have responsibilities about your family members' happiness, what would you feel if your children want something and you could not afford it? And it would have a butterfly effect in your family. Someone’s sadness would affect other family members emotions negatively, and you would live in an unhappy family. Lastly, many scholars assert that, people who have an economical power, have a good health. Their bodies emit serotonin which has a good impact on their health. So wealth is a crucial thing which can not be ignored in determining an individual’s happiness.
Is this your opinion and if so, can you tell me why in more detail?
2021년 6월 10일
According to my perspective income and happiness have a collateral relationship with each other. I am sure that many people have different opinions about this topic, but the economy is a significant thing that has an impact/influence on an individual’s happiness. In daily life, we see many examples about it. For example, if you want to buy a new cell phone, and you do not have enough money. Then it would affect your emotion negatively, and on the other hand, if you had enough money and could buy it, you would be happy. Consider a father having two children so he would have responsibilities for his family member’s happiness. What would he feel if his children want something and he could not afford it? And it would have a butterfly effect on the family. Someone’s sadness would affect other family members emotions negatively and may lead to an unhappy family. Lastly, many scholars assert that some people who have nominal power, have good health. Their bodies emit serotonin good impact on their health. So that happiness has a crucial thing that can not be ignored in an individual’s happiness.
2021년 6월 9일
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