Ann
Dear staff
According to the financial statement, the profit margin of this quarter has inceased by 20 percent, because of your excellent services, our big client placed extra orders. In order to thank your contirbution, we would like to offer each of you either 1.000 pounds bonus or three paid leave days.
Ann
2022년 8월 30일 오전 8:22
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Dear staff According to our financial statements, the profit margin for this
quarter has inceased by 20 percent. Because of your excellent service, our biggest
client placed extra orders. In order to thank you for your contribution, we would like
to offer each of you either a 1,000 pound bonus or three paid leave days. Ann
I’ll have the thousand pounds!
2022년 8월 30일
Dear staff
According to the financial statement, the profit margin of this quarter has inceased by 20 percent, because of your excellent services, our big client placed extra orders. In order to thank your contirbution, we would like to offer each of you either 1.000 pounds bonus or three paid leave days.
Ann
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2022년 8월 30일
Dear staff
Our latest financial statement indicates a twenty percent profit margin increase (for this quarter). Thanks to your excellent services, our biggest client placed extra orders. As a reward, I would like to offer each of you either a 1.000 pounds bonus or three days of paid leave.
Ann
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2022년 8월 30일
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