although I like my city Bogotá, there are many bad designs in it, for example the streets really, the streets were not planned in advance and were built in such a way that they are in many cases too s

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Camilo Diaz

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although I like my city Bogotá, there are many bad designs in it, for example the streets really, the streets were not planned in advance and were built in such a way that they are in many cases too small to house many cars generating a lot of traffic, also many of those streets do not connect with main highways so it causes a lot of traffic in the same way.

2022년 3월 28일 오후 3:23

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I live in Bogotá, I like the city but there are many bad architectural designs in it. For example, the streets were not planned in advance and were built too small to house many cars. Also, many of those streets don't connect with main highways. Both of these architectural designs cause many traffic problems.

Hello Camilo! I think your attempt was great! Honestly, I understood everything you were trying to let us know! My corrections just made your post more direct and assertive.

2022년 3월 28일

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