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I would like to go to Australia because my friend is living there. I want to go to a foreign country’s supermarket. I think it is bigger than Japanese ones. And there will be many kinds of products there. I am interested in foreign products. I hope I can go someday. I have to save money.
2025년 7월 1일 오전 1:12
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I would like to go to Australia because my friend is living there. I want to go to a foreign country’s supermarket. I think it is bigger than the Japanese ones, and there will be many kinds of products there. I am interested in foreign products. I hope I can go someday. I have to save money.
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2025년 7월 1일 오전 3:42
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