Good job, Fernando. I was able to understand everything pretty easily on my first time listening to your recording.
A few things that could be improved:
¨This photo was taken in Canada¨¨ (it sounded like one syllable was missing...I wasn´t sure if you said ¨This photo was take in Canada¨ or ¨This photo was taken Canada)
¨snow on the ground¨ will sound more natural than ¨snow on the floor.¨ ¨Floor¨ usually is used to talk about the floor inside a building. (We do occasionally talk about the ¨floor of the ocean¨ or ¨the floor of the forest¨, but those are usages are much less common).
use ¨frozen¨ instead of ¨freezed¨ (One of our irregular verbs! ¨Freezed¨ does not exist in English)
¨there is some fog¨ instead of ¨there are some fog¨ (Fog is normally an uncountable noun and thus needs a singular verb).
Your pacing was good and you sounded pretty comfortable. Well done, Fernando.