Angelo Bitetti
I don't have any pets. My home is very small and I don't have a yard, so there is not enough space for a dog. I don't like birds, reptiles and bugs as pets, so the only possible choice is a cat ( I love them) but my mother hates them
2023년 2월 18일 오후 3:26
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2023년 2월 19일
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I don't have any pets. My home is very small and I don't have a yard, so there isn't enough space for a dog. I don't like birds, reptiles or bugs as pets, so the only possible choice is a cat (I love them), but my mother hates them
Very good! I corrected "is not" to "isn't" because it sounds more natural to me and you already used "don't". In a formal essay you might not want to use contractions like these, but this seems to be more casual, and in that case I encourage you to use them.
2023년 2월 18일
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