I'm so tired because yesterday's live concert was so fun! But, the live concert is 2days. So I also join today. I'm looking forward to deference to yesterday. I'll enjoy that fully too!

Nakajiii

2025년 4월 27일 오전 4:10

교정 · 1

I'm so tired because yesterday's live concert was so much fun! But the live concert lasts/goes on for two days, so I am also going today. I'm looking forward to deference to yesterday. (I don't understand what you're saying here) I'll enjoy that fully too!

SO FUN is okay for informal speech/writing ; strict grammarians say FUN is a noun, not an adjective. Smaller numbers (maybe less than 20)) should be written out - unless you're texting or something. JOIN is an odd word to use, unless the concert is online.

2025년 4월 27일 오전 6:13

더 빨리 진행하고 싶나요?

이 학습 커뮤니티에 참여하고 무료로 연습해보세요!