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There are lots of global environmental problems we are facing nowadays. First of all,massive of gas emissions are released into the air,they have global warming effects on earth,the glaciers are melting and the sea levels are increasing. In addition, lots of species are in danger,if they die out on earth one day,the eco system will be disrupted and will have a series of bad effects. The over exploitation of land, the soil might degrade and can't produce enough food in the future. There are lots of pollutions threaten the existence of humans, for example,air pollution, water pollution and light pollution. The overmining of many natural resources,the earth is faced with exhaustion of many energy and power, it is not sustainable for humans' development in the long run.
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2021년 9월 18일 오전 5:45
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There are lots of global environmental problems that we face nowadays. First of
all,massive gas emissions are released into the air. They have the effect of global warming
on earth. The glaciers are melting and the sea levels are increasing. In
addition, lots of species are in danger. If they die out on earth one day,the ecosystem will be disrupted and this will have a series of bad consequences.
Further, with the over-exploitation of land, the soil might degrade and not be be to produce enough food in
the future.
There are lots of pollutants threatening the existence of humans, for
example,air pollution, water pollution and light pollution.
With the overmining of
many natural resources,the earth is faced with exhaustion of much energy and
power - it is not sustainable for humans' development in the long run.
Well done. Remember to separate out long sentences into two.
Also, remember words which qualify more specifically what you are saying. 'Which'. 'That'.
In English, we use more paragraphs for clarity, but you really are doing well.
2021년 9월 18일
There are numerous global environmental issues that we face today. To begin with, massive amounts of gas emissions are released into the atmosphere, causing global warming, glaciers to melt, and sea levels to rise. Furthermore, many species are endangered; if they go extinct one day, the eco system will be disrupted, resulting in a series of negative consequences. Because of over-exploitation of land, the soil may degrade and be unable to produce enough food in the future. There are numerous types of pollution that endanger human existence, such as air pollution, water pollution, and light pollution. Because of the reduction of many natural resources, Planet Earth is experiencing the exhaustion of numerous energy sources; that is not sustainable for human development in the long run.
Hi Miss Xie, how are you doing? Keep up the great work!
2021년 9월 18일
There are lots of global environmental problems we are facing nowadays. First of
all,a massive amount of gas emissions are released into the air,they have global warming
effects on the Earth ,the glaciers are melting and the sea levels are rising. In
addition, lots of species are in danger,if they get extinct one day,the ecosystem will be disrupted and this will have series of negative effects. When it comes to the over exploitation of land, the soil might degrade and no longer be able to produce enough food in
the future. There are lots of types of pollution threatening the existence of humans, for
example,air pollution, water pollution and light pollution. Due to the excessive mining of
many natural resources,the Earth is faced with exhaustion of the sources of energy. It is not sustainable for humans' development in the long run.
2021년 9월 18일
There are a lots of global environmental problems that we are facing nowadays. First of
all, massive gas emissions are released into the air and they have severe global warming
effects on earth,the glaciers are melting and the sea levels are increasing. In
addition, lots of species are in danger,if they die out on earth one day,the eco
system will be disrupted and will have a series of bad effects. The over
exploitation of land, the soil might degrade and will no longer produce enough food in
the future. There are a lots of pollutions that threatens the existence of humans, for
example,air pollution, water pollution and light pollution. The overmining of
many natural resources,the earth is faced with exhaustion of many energy and
power, it is not sustainable for humans' development in the long run.
2021년 9월 18일
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