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Today, I’d like to talk about something I enjoy. I like taking walks without thinking about anything. Some people say they enjoy walking on unfamiliar roads, but I’m not one of them. I prefer walking along roads I already know, letting my mind wander—or not think at all.
I’m not someone who particularly likes exercise, but when I was in high school, I often went on long walks whenever I felt troubled or stressed. Maybe because of that, even now, I clear my head by walking whenever I’m worried about something.
On the other hand, something I’m not good at is keeping in touch regularly. Even though smartphones make it easy to communicate, I’m really bad at replying to messages. I tend to let them pile up. And when they pile up too much, they start to feel like homework, which makes me dislike it even more.
Some people can exchange messages easily, but I overthink what to say, worry too much about it, and end up getting worse at communicating. Because I have this tendency to overthink, walking helps me refresh my mind. Today, I wrote about both something I like and something I’m not good at. I want to fill my days with as many things I enjoy as possible and spend my time peacefully with a smile. I hope you all do plenty of the things you love, too!
2025년 11월 27일 오후 2:35
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Today, I’d like to talk about something I enjoy. I like taking walks without thinking about anything. Some people enjoy walking on unfamiliar roads, but I’m not one of them. I prefer walking along roads I already know and letting my mind wander—or not think at all.
I’m not someone who really likes exercise, but when I was in high school, I often went on long walks whenever I felt troubled or stressed. Maybe because of that, even now, I clear my head by walking whenever something worries me.
On the other hand, something I’m not good at is keeping in touch regularly. Even though smartphones make communication easy, I’m terrible at replying to messages. I let them pile up, and when there are too many, they start to feel like homework, which makes me avoid them even more.
Some people can reply quickly and easily, but I overthink what to say, worry too much, and end up communicating even worse. Because I have this habit of overthinking, walking helps me refresh my mind. Today, I wrote about something I enjoy and something I struggle with. I want to fill my days with things that make me happy and spend my time peacefully. I hope you all do many things you love, too!
Short Tip - Your ideas are very clear. Try using more linking words like “however,” “because of this,” or “as a result” to make the flow even smoother.
2025년 11월 27일 오후 4:48
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