Search from various 영어 teachers...
Konomi
To me, the most important things in life are health, safety, and love.
First, health is crucial because, without it, we can’t do anything. Last week, I had gastroenteritis. While my stomach was hurting, I couldn’t work, eat, or even talk to my family. No matter how many dreams or goals we have, we can’t pursue them if we aren’t healthy.
Safety is also essential to me. We can’t think or move freely if we are in unsafe situations. Safety means being in a situation where people feel relaxed and don’t have to worry about their well-being. Unfortunately, we are sometimes exposed to unsafe environments, such as a workplace with harassing colleagues or a home with abusive parents. Everyone could find themselves in such situations, so securing a safe space is vital in my life.
The final important thing is love. Love forms the strong foundation for everything. I believe that love and care for others shape how we act. By considering others’ feelings, we can create meaningful connections. Since we can’t avoid interacting with others as long as we live in this world, isn’t it beneficial to build better relationships through love?
2024년 10월 7일 오전 4:49
교정 · 1
To me, the most important things in life are health, safety, and love. First,
health is crucial because, without it, we can’t do anything. Last week, I had
gastroenteritis. While my stomach was hurting, I couldn’t work, eat, or even
talk to my family. No matter how many dreams or goals we have, we can’t pursue
them if we aren’t healthy. Safety is also essential to me. We can’t think or
move freely if we are in unsafe situations. Safety means being in a situation
where people feel relaxed and don’t have to worry about their well-being.
Unfortunately, we are sometimes exposed to unsafe environments, such as a
workplace with harassing colleagues or a home with abusive parents. Everyone (Anybody)
could find themselves in such situations, so securing a safe space is vital in
my life. The final important thing is love. Love forms the strong foundation for
everything. I believe that love and care for others shape how we act. By
considering others’ feelings, we can create meaningful connections. Since we
can’t avoid interacting with others as long as we live in this world, isn’t it
beneficial to build better relationships through love?
GREAT PIECE OF WRITING. WELL DONE
2024년 10월 7일
더 빨리 진행하고 싶나요?
이 학습 커뮤니티에 참여하고 무료로 연습해보세요!
Konomi
언어 구사 능력
아랍어, 영어, 일본어, 페르시아어
학습 언어
아랍어, 영어
좋아할 수도 있는 읽을거리

Same Word, Different Meaning: American, British, and South African English
21 좋아요 · 17 댓글

How to Sound Confident in English (Even When You’re Nervous)
15 좋아요 · 12 댓글

Marketing Vocabulary and Phrases for Business English Learners
13 좋아요 · 6 댓글
다른 읽을거리
