Tuyaara
The new year is very big and significant celebration in my country. In that time there are a lot of new year trees everywhere. Father frost (Santa Claus) usually comes to children to celebrate at schools and kindergartens. People decorate their homes, give presents to each other. There are full of foods on the table at 00.00 o'clock 31st of December. At 00.00 o'clock there are a lot of fireworks and champagne.
2023년 3월 27일 오후 1:12
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Teacher Pierre, it should be visits, not visit.
2023년 3월 27일
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The new year is a very big and important celebration in my country. In that time there are a lot of new year trees everywhere. Father frost (Santa Claus) usually visit children at schools and kindergartens to celebrate. People decorate their homes and exchange presents with each other. There is a lot of of food on the table and at midnight on the 31st of December there are a lot of fireworks and everyone drinks champagne.
2023년 3월 27일
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New Year is a very big and significant holiday in my country. During that time there are a lot of new year trees everywhere. Grandfather Frost (Santa Claus) usually comes to children to celebrate at schools and kindergartens. People decorate their homes, give presents to each other. The tables are full of various foods at 00:00 o'clock (noon) on the 31st of December. At 00:00 o'clock there are a lot of fireworks and champagne.
Great job, Tuyaara!
2023년 3월 27일
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