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The graphs provide information about a tourist zone on an island by displaying two maps, one before and one after the construction of facilities such as accommodation, restaurant, and reception areas. Before the development of the tourist project, there were only trees spread on the map and a natural beach in the left corner. No any facilities were on this island. After the construction, this small wild island became to be a lively tourist park. People could swim near the beach because of security arrangements. The reception was built in the centre of the island, near the restaurant in the north. Tourists could reach reception directly from the pier when they landed. There were two accommodation blocks on the island. One was close to the beach, around the small jungle, and the other was on the other side of the reception house. There is no change to the eastern jungle. People could enter the jungle from the right accommodation block. The pier was not big but enough to accept two boats. In conclusion, the design and construction transformed the small island into a new feature.
2023년 4월 18일 오후 4:29
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The two maps (they are not graphs, you could say charts or drawings) provide information about a tourist island (it’s the whole island) before and after the building of facilities such as accommodation, a restaurant, and a reception area. Before the development of the tourist project, there were only trees spread on the map and a natural beach in the left corner. There were no facilities were on this island. After the construction, this small wild island has become a lively tourist area. People can swim near the beach because of security arrangements. (What security arrangements?) A reception area has been built in the centre of the island, near the restaurant in the north. Tourists can reach reception directly from the pier when they land. There are two accommodation blocks on the island. One is close to the beach, around the small jungle (jungle is a bit much - maybe a few palm trees) and the other is on the other side of the reception building. There is no change to the eastern jungle. People can enter the jungle from the accommodation block on the east of the island. The pier is not big but it is large enough to moor two boats. In conclusion, the design and construction has transformed the small island into a new feature.
The second map is ‘after’ so you can treat it as being now.
2023년 4월 18일
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