Hello everyone. I'm Letícia and I live in Brazil in a beach city. I really love here but my dream is travel the world knowing other cultures, people, places from my favorite TV's shows and much more.

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Leticia Morais

Hello everyone. I'm Letícia and I live in Brazil in a beach city. I really love here but my dream is travel the world knowing other cultures, people, places from my favorite TV's shows and much more. I chose learning english because I grow up listening english/american songs so I have facility with the language. Bye bye

2022년 7월 11일 오후 6:49

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Hi Letícia, I hope you've been having a good experience on italki so far. Here are a few feedback points on what you wrote above. 1) "I really love here" - it's better to say "I really love *it* here" or "I really love *living* here". 2) "my dream is travel the world" - we need to say "my dream is *to* travel the world". 3) "I grow up listening english/american songs" should be "I *grew* up listening *to* English/American songs" (the main thing there is to remember to put the main verb in the past) Good luck with your studies!

2022년 7월 19일