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It was overcast today. At home, I read a story about resources. The prompt we were given was: “Is wind energy or fossil energy better?” I believe that, despite its environmental drawbacks, fossil energy might be the best choice. Wind energy is not always reliable since wind is not consistently available, whereas fossil energy can consistently provide electricity. Additionally, fossil energy is widely used already as wind energy requires great initial investment. However, I am a bit conflicted. Should I prioritize environmental friendliness or convenience? Ultimately, I still think fossil energy is the most convenient way to generate electricity, even though it may not be the most sustainable option.
2025년 5월 17일 오전 11:59
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It was overcast today. At home, I read a story about resources. The prompt we
were given was: “Is wind energy or fossil energy better?” I believe that,
despite its environmental drawbacks, fossil energy might be the best choice.
Wind energy is not always reliable since wind is not consistently available,
whereas fossil energy can consistently provide electricity. Additionally, fossil
energy is widely used already as wind energy requires great initial investment.
However, I am a bit conflicted. Should I prioritize environmental friendliness
or convenience? Ultimately, I still think fossil energy is the most convenient
way to generate electricity, even though it may not be the most sustainable
option.
Well argued. 
2025년 5월 17일 오후 12:01
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