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Ksenia Sobol
Could you check my little text? I always wanted a cat. When I was a child I have got a cat. The cat called Kuzya. He was black with a white neck and paws. He lived with us 3 or 5 years. I don’t know what happened but he was taken away to my grandma. He didn’t want to live there and one day he left. I cried and cried, but he didn’t come back. My second cat is Keks, calls like pie if it translates in English. He is black and white, beautiful! I love him. He is four years old. He was born on Christmas. We took him to home from an animal shelter. Everybody love him so much!
2023년 8월 14일 오후 4:12
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Hello Ksenia. Great job with this! I've included a corrected version below: I always wanted a cat. When I was a child I got a cat. The cat was called Kuzya. He was black with a white neck and paws. He lived with us for 3 or 5 years. I don't know what happened, but he was taken to my grandma. He didn't want to live there, and one day he left. I cried and cried, but he didn't come back. My second cat is Keks, or "pie" if translated into English. He is black and white, beautiful! I love him. He is four years old. He was born on Christmas. We took him home from an animal shelter. Everybody loves him so much! Let me know if you have any questions!
2023년 8월 14일
hi
2023년 8월 15일
커뮤니티 가이드라인을 위반한 콘텐츠입니다.
2023년 8월 15일
아직도 답을 찾지 못하셨나요?
질문을 남겨보세요. 원어민이 도움을 줄 수 있을 거예요!