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Wendy
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Have you ever been to Dongguan Botanical Garden? It is a beautiful and peaceful place, shaded by green trees and filled with the fragrance of flowers. You can enjoy a variety of plants. In addition to plants, it also has many entertainment facilities and activity projects. You can visit exhibition halls such as Butterfly Pavilion and Rock Pavilion to learn about the ecology and habits of animals and plants; You can also participate in various outdoor activities, such as picnics, hiking, cycling, flying kites, etc. Dongguan Botanical Garden is one of my favorite amusement parks. I believe that whoever comes here will be attracted by its charm .
2024년 2월 23일 오전 9:34
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Would you do me a favor by making the speech simpler and natural ? Thanks Have
you ever been to Dongguan Botanical Garden? It is a beautiful and peaceful
place, with shade from the green trees and filled with the fragrance of flowers. You can
enjoy a variety of plants. In addition to plants, it also has many entertainment
facilities and activity projects. You can visit exhibition halls such as
Butterfly Pavilion and Rock Pavilion to learn about the ecology and habits of
animals and plants; You can also participate in various outdoor activities, such
as picnics, hiking, cycling, flying kites, etc. Dongguan Botanical Garden is one
of my favorite amusement parks. I believe that whoever comes here will be
attracted by its charm .
Very good, well done.
2024년 2월 23일
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