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Riko
Good morning! It feels like the rainy season is already over the sun is burning down and it’s way too hot today. I have the final class of my course seminar, and we’re doing presentations. I’m a bit nervous, but I’ll do my best. After class, I’m planning to stop by a new café that just opened near my house. I’ve already fallen in love with it!
2025년 7월 18일 오전 12:04
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Good morning! It feels like the rainy season is already over. The sun is burning down and it’s way too hot today. I have the final class of my course seminar, and we’re doing presentations. I’m a bit nervous, but I’ll do my best. After class, I’m planning to stop by a new café that just opened near my house. I’ve already fallen in love with it!
The first sentence is a bit awkward and is better split into two sentences. Great job!
2025년 7월 18일 오전 1:15
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