Writing to practise my English. Could you correct me, please! Your next travelling to XXX I´m going to tell you about the charm of XXX. XXX is an spectacular, amazing, appealing...city. It has a lot of things to visit, for this reason, it´s very difficult to choose any one. I love XXX. Therefore, I´m eager to write about it. In XXX, there are many places with a lot of history, and there are many modern places too. You choose it! I like very much to go for a walk to a park in the centre of the city , called XXX. There, there is a very big pond with goldfish. Moreover, you can sail in a boat. You can find little monuments as well...and all around you is green. If you like the trees, you must go there, because there are many kinds of them. Also, XXX has got Al´s cathedral. It´s amazing! In this cathedral is where our prince “F” married. It is a bit history in XXX. And If you want to enjoy, you should go to Theme Park. I know you have got another in your city, but this is different! There are a lot of restaurants and very funny attractions! I wish you could enjoy it!

Could you correct me, please! I don´t know whether I use well the modals or not! Dear friend, I regarding to you for your problem to sleep well. You should try to sleep only when you are sleepy. If you go the bed, and you can´t sleep, you should stand up and, I think you must read a book or a magazine, or you must listen to classical music, and you do it on a comfortable seat. It´s to relax you! You try not to drink drinks which could put you nervious. In addition, don´t dinner too much. You must procure that when you will be on your bed, you have to be good. Go you to a gym!. With the exercise you feel tired. I try to do all these things to sleep better, and they help me! Sleeping is very important in the life, because If you sleep bad, you feel tired all the day. I hope that these things could help you to sleep. I look forward your answer!

You and a friend are planning a trip to England and want to go for a walk in London.Correct me,pleas Dear friend, I have been seeing the different places to go for a walk in London. I believe that “Park walk” will be the best option., becuase we love the nature. In addition, we adore to see free animals ( animals in free). It´s the largest route of them. Therefore, we can walk more. We will see the pretties flowers, and in this season is all green!. I hope we can see many animals, and I wish we could touch them as well!. It will be amazing, shall we? We could do a picnic there. We will prepare our food or we can buy takeaway there!. The others routes are fantastic too, but I would like sightseeing other days. This routes are to see historic monuments, Romans´church... in general ( generally) London´s history. I want to do them as well, but first, I would like to walk in Richmond Park. Are you agree with me? I look forward your answer soon!

Could you correct me, please? I´m training for my english exam! Pop Music Festival in Madrid Last week, I went to a Pop Music Festival, and I´m going to tell you about this. As I see it, I believe that the best parts in the Festival were when the dancers did a spectacular and amazing performance with fluorescent paint. They switch off the lights, and we only saw the bright paint. It was awesome! Other important moment was when “XXX” appeared. It was incredible and excited!. All the people who where in the performance sang her songs with her. And the other hand, I think that the worst part was when we wanted to eat, because we were hungry!. There weren´t any places to eat, nothing!. If you didn´t take your food, you had a seriusly problem! In my opinion, the bands and singers that played there, they were perfects!. Their performances liked very much. Moreover, the lights effects were gorgeous!. The audience enjoyed a lot, include me!. I was eager here! If you can go the next year, I recommend you it!

Could you correct me, please? Tell me whether I have used "must" and "have to" correctly. Is good the discipline? I´m going to tell you about the news rules in “A” school. The rules that the students have to follow are a quite hard: First, they have to wait to their teachers to go to the class, in the second place, they must wear an uniform, in addition, they have to have a good look ( the hair, shoes...), third, the students mustn´t use their mobile phone in class. Also, they can´t go to a fast-food restaurant for lunch, and last but not least, if they don´t do their homework, they have to stay when the class finish. In the school have had many changes, for instance, the building is more new, it has more money for sports activities and for improving the teaching. Moreover, the students is going to the bests universities now. As I see, the school has got better, but maybe the rules are too severes, since in “A” school there are little children as well.

Could you correct me, please? Dear friend, I am write to you because I want to tell you my dicision to participate in a thriathlon competition, and I would like your opinion about this. A competition of thriathlon consist in three sports: we have to ride a bycicle,swim and run in a race that the distance depend on the level. I want to try the thriathlon because I love to do sports. In my life, I have done only marathons, races in mountain bike... and this is a little dream that I have always had. I know that it´s a very difficult competition, but my goal will be finish it! I have already started with my training. All the days, when I ´m going to my house before the job, my exercices starts! I run 1 hour all the days, and I go to swimmingpool every day, and I ride with the bicycle five times in the week. I have to change my diet, and I only eat healthy food. I look forward to your answer!

Could you help me with me article, please? Imagine history 1st Decembrer, 2012 Dear diary, The other day, I was running throught the park that it´s near to my house, because I like to feel me good, and I want to do exercise to be helthier. And what was my surprise?? I found one houndred euros in the ground! I was very excited and happy! and I felt like arriving at home to tell it my boyfriend. I don´t know already what I can do with this money. There is a lot of ideas in my mind to do with the money, for instance, I would like to invite my boyfriend to have a dinner or we will be able to go out in the weekend to a romantic hotel... When I was talking with my boyfriend about this, we thought to buy the Christmas´presents. It´s a good idea as well! So, when I know the answer, I will write again!

Correct me, please! Dear friend, I´m going to go to New York the next week because I haven´t job in Spain, and it´s very difficult to find. I think that this experience will be good for me because I will learn and perfect my English, and last but not least, I have always wanted to live in other country to know other manners to live. What do you think about my plan? Do you believe that I will have good luck? I hope your answer!

If I have to go on a long journey again, I definitely won´t travel by bus: Está bien escrito?? 2. Escribir una historia que empiece con " If I have to go on a long journey again, I definitely won´t travel by bus", because when I went to Amsterdam, the plane left me in Switzerland, and I had to travel by bus. My journey was horrible! During the journey, my partner smelt quite bad, the seat was very uncomfortable, and last but not least, it was summer, and I had much heat, since the bus hadn´t air conditioning. The journey was very long, but diring it, they put us a film, although I had already seen. When the film finished, I was very bored all the route. My next journey will be by plane, I´m sure!, because it´s more comfortable, more sure and it smell very good! I did this journey by bus only because I saved a lot of money.