children's bringingup Some people believe that children who growing up in poor families will have full knowldge to prepare their life in the future than those who are brough up in families with good living conditions. However, personally , I do not completely agree about this viewpoint; in other words, I support the view that living condition is one of factors affecting on child's personal growth and their understanding before stepping into life.(72) On the one hand, I agree that children from less wealthy families might be in better position to deal with adtult life. Children whose parents have less money learn how to fight, struggle and solve daily-life problems. They are forced to rely on themselves because they have less financial help from parents and can not get what you want as soon as they want it. For example, poor children have to wait until their birthday to receive toys or games that they have asked for, and this courages them to learn patience. They also learn the importance of managing money and the value of hard working, which will be the vital lesson for their later life.(116) On the other hand, I believe that children who are bough up in wealthy families have numerous opportunities to approach high education systems, not only enriching their knowldge and experieces but also seemly give them well-prepared future. They can participate fully in studying, but do not mind about daily-life costs or fees, so they are not distracted by daily life, such as food, clothes, money, except for studying.(66) In conclusion, I think that living condition affects apartly on child's later life, but completely; and the important key to help children to deal with adult life in the future is education.(32)

Traffic solutions It is true that traffic congestion is an insolvable problem in metropolises in modern life. Therefore, governments should be find an answer for the difficult question to reduce influences on quality of life of people who live in these cities. One of the main the main caustes of traffic congestion is that commuters travel to work at the same time. In this essay, several solutions are listed below to repair this issue. Firstly, most people should be encouraged to use buses, undergrounds instead of driving private cars.Thus, goverments should improve public transportation systems and make them more modern and faster, but with a cheap price. Secondly, to decrease a volume of people commuting to heart of cities, government should move a part of workplaces to outskirts. Finally, employers should allow their employees work from home by connecting the Internet to work. This solution would not only avoid traffic congestion, but also reduce the employees' travelling costs and time. In conclusion, it is necessary to reduce the number of communters travelling to work at the same time in order to improve the traffic congestion situation by upgrading public transport systems, moving a part of workplace far away from center of cites, and encouraging employees to work from home. P/S: I practice for IELTS, so I want to know that my writing style is right or not.