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STATEMENT: It's parent's fault, that children are overweight. Hi guys, STATEMENT: It's parent's fault, that children are overweight. This is my opinion on the statement above: I agree with this statement because parents can play an important role on avoiding their children getting overweight by not eating out in fast foods like McDonald's or by not allowing them eat some certain unhealthy and/or fatty foods. But, many parents are unfortunately not aware of dangers of different diseases caused by overweight. Some people believe that it is the fault of fast food companies that makes the children overweight, because they encourage the children or their parents consuming their food using distracting marketing strategies and advertisements. But I am not agree with them, because those companies contribute to the economy of our country and yet, people can think and consider the consequences of eating in those restaurants, but it doesn't apply to the children, of course. _____ I appreciate any of your corrections, comments or ideas writing this in some other way, like using other words or.. . Thanks, Aziz.
2015년 7월 31일
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Doing my internship in the US Hi everyone, My name is Aziz, I live and study in the Netherlands and I'm planning to do my internship in the United States next year. That's the reason why I'm trying to improve my English to get properly prepared for this adventure. I believe living for a few months in the United States will allow me to learn more about the people's culture and the places I will visit there (which are very different than those in Europe) and improve my English as well as experiencing working at an American company. So there are the reasons why I consider doing my internship in the US as an adventure. I'll be very grateful if you could help me correcting this notebook entry. I have one more question: Do you have any better suggestions writing something expressing what I mean in the text above? Please let me know about it! I'll appreciate your help! Thanks a lot for reading this and trying to help me improving my writing skills in English. Aziz.
2015년 7월 30일
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