Final work, student nurse (help to correct) Hello, can you help me to correct error ? Thanks you so much ! Nowadays, there are more and more patient affect by chronic diseases. I have notice during work experience the presence of group’s therapeutics education. I asked myself what were the profits of this education to the patients. My question of departure is the next one: in what is complementary the group’s education to an individualized education? My researches are going to base themselves on the modules « Nursing’s technical sciences and method » and « nurse’s technical sciences and intervention ». To confront my theoretical researches, I have realized three semi-directional interviews with nurses realizing therapeutics educations in various services. The analysis allowed putting forward the importance of a group’s education, the advantages and the inconveniences, the methods and tools used and these sessions’s efficiency with the patient. Therefore, what emerges from my research is the importance of experience’s exchange between the patients and the patient’s accompaniment by the health professionals. Keys words: Therapeutics education, relation nurse-patient, observance, group.

Anorexie mentale Voici un texte que j'ai écrit en anglais et je voulais savoir si ma syntaxe est bonne et si j'ai des fautes ! Merci It's not easy to identify anorexia knowing that people make many effort to hide this discorder. To detect anorexia nervosa, several warning signs can be spotted. They can be origin physical, psychological and behavioural. For that I will mention you the main signs of anorexia in the differents categories mentioned above. First, i will give you the physical signs. The person may have a rapid weight lost, feeling cold, a slow heartbeat, dizziness, discorder or absence menstruation and repeated vomiting. Morever, there are the psychological signs. There can be a fear of take weight, a disturbance of the image body, an apprehension during the meals, the difficults of concentration, feeling anxious, depression, a fear to gaining, low self esteem, preoccupation with eating. Finally, i will give you the behavioral signs. These people use abusive laxative, diuretic. They avoid the calorric and the fatty food, they are obsessed about weight control and reflexion in the miror. They eat in private and adopt an antisocial comportment. It is necessary to know that it's important to locate the signs of anorexia of as soon as possible to reduce the psychological and physical consequences on the person.

9/11 Terrorist attack ! :'( Hi ! I had to analyze the cover of the New Yorker in less than 220 words ! :) "Tourism is developing a lot nowadays. After the 9/11 terrorist attack, Ground Zero became the place to be visited in New York City. How a terrorist attack can attract people ? We will answer to this question thanks to a New Yorker cover. First, we'll see what happened on that day and then, how it is attracting so much tourists. On the 9th September 2001, the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center collapsed after two planes crashed into them. This event disturbed the world. There has been 3000 deaths and more than 6000 people injured. This event was broadcast all over the world on the TV. On the cover's illustration we can clearly see that the scene takes place at Ground Zero, in New York, where a memorial was build in memory of the 9th September 2001. Since that day, a lot of people chose to visit that place. Indeed, there are a lot of people on the cover. They may want to pay tribute to the victims, or just see that place for real. Some people seem to have racial prejudices like that man on the bottom right-hand-corner who is staring at a veiled woman. To conclude, disasters can lead to the augmentation of tourism for different kind of reasons such as curiosity or the fact of paying tribute." Thank you in advance for any help you can provide. :)