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I would need somebody to correct this essay please
Many people strongly believe that since there are lots of cases of overweight in humans who do not seem to die, that is not an actual issue. However, others such as doctors are deeply preoccupied about this problem.
First of all, is undeniable that drinking is a matter of concern in our society but, there are aspects which are more relevant in making people gain kilograms. Furthermore, alcohol in its majority affects liver mainly rather than height.
On the other hand, unhealthy food such as hamburgers from McDonalds, play a key role in the overweight subject. Therefore, if harmful fats are removed in that type of food, it would be less damaging for us consuming them.
As for supermarket goods, an urgent action is needed to reduce its high levels in sugar and fats. Moreover, their prices tend to be low, producing by this way a huge amount of sales
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To sum up, in order to solve this issue, companies should take several actions which lead us to a difficult solution. Unfortunately, it is all in their hands.
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What do you feel about counterfeit goods? Would you buy them? Why? / Why not?
From my point of view I consider this an option for those who don’t have enough money to buy fashionable clothes at a high price; even so, I reckon that designers and people who work in this field are being affected because of this illegal act.
If you ask me, I would buy clothes that have a lower price than others with a higher one, but never a knock-off, as that would be the only way to avoid law problems.
So, I’d rather save up or cut down the amount of money I spend on clothes instead of buy false imitations or something like that. I’m absolutely sure there are other options that have even better materials and prices than the high fashion brands.
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What is the correct use of though?
I usually see this word at the end of a sentence, other times, at the beginning. Also, there is a variation "although?. What is the difference?
Thanks in advance
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