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Können Sir mir helfen bitte? Ich brauche Aufsatz zu korrigieren.
Diese Nacht, warden wir zur Sky tree gehen. Es gibt den Skytree in Oshiage gegend. Der Oshiage gegend ist zu Fuß zehn Minuten von Asakusa. Es ist das höchste Gebäude in Japan. Viele Touristen besuchen Jeden Tag dieser Skytree. Der Preis für eine Zahlung von 1700 yen zuätzlich zum Eintrittspreis für das Observation Deck an der Besichtigung teilnehmen. Wenn Sie nachts dort hinaufgehen, können Sie eine sehr schöne Panorama-Nachtansicht von Tokyo sehen. Es gibt nicht nur ein Einkaufszentrum, sondern auch ein Aquarium unter dem Skytree. In diesen aquarium sind die üblichen Geschäftzeiten von neun bis und zwanzig Uhr. Ich empfehle, nachts dorthin zu fahren, weil die Beleuchtung in der Nacht sehr romantisch ist.
Es ist berühmt für Pinguin- und Jerryfische. Vor allem in einem Café können Sie Bier und Cocktails trinken, während Sie Pinguin beobachten. In Oshiage gibt es viele modische Restaurants. Ich denke, Sie können etwas finden, das Sie zum Abendessen essen möchten.
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Hausaufgabe
1.Wohnt Ihre hübsche Tochter in Tokyo.
2.Er ist ein guter Freund meiner alten Klvierlehrerin.
3.Sein kleines Haus steht am Meer.
4.Auch internationaler Rockgruppen geben hier Gastkonzerte.
5.Jeder kennt jenen grausamen Krieg.
6.Der Professor singt immer alte deutsche Volkslieder.
7.Auch bei schlechtem Wetter machen wir übermorgen einen kleinen.
8.Saurer Regen macht die Bäume kaputt.
9.Ich brauche ein sicheres Resultat.
10.Für ausländische Touristen sind die japanischen Toiletten ein großes Problem.
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Leisure time in Japan
Although Japanese also have “Leisure time”, but the style of the Leisure time is quite different compared to the western culture. There are two factors to compare the difference which are time use and leisure activity.
First of all, there are less vacation time in Japanese society because of the social system are not allowed to have long vacation especially working age. Even though the government has promised to take effective measures to increase the vacation, that seems not effective at all. In addition, the daily work is too hard that they can’t do other necessary things for example, housework. Therefore when they get free time they tend to spend time for doing housework or sleeping.
Secondly, according to Japanese holiday institution, it is not easy to take large holiday. Even though people can get longer holiday, usually it is no more than 10 days. Therefore, the activity that people can do is very limited.
Therefore, I think that Japanese people are not define leisure time. The concept of the leisure time is different. In Japanese society, I could say there are no leisure time because people can not relax if they do other housework or other tasks to do in the time that suppose to be leisure time.
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What I learned from the lecture about marketing
Although It is very difficult for me to understand what the professor said in the lecture because of lack of knowledge about marketing, I could learn a lot of things though this class. One of the most impressive things that I learned about marketing is that marketing is strongly affected by lifestyle. In other words, when the lifestyle changes, the marketing system also have to change because of demands will change. In the lecture, professor compared the difference between traditional lifestyle and current lifestyle to make the contrast. For example, Men are the one who made the decision to buy big ticket items because they earn money for the family in traditionally. However, nowadays the number of women who work outside and lead their family is increasing. Therefore big ticket items markets are not for only men anymore. These changes create big impacts on the companies. So that they have to came up with the idea to appeal women. From my point of view as a female, it is very delightful that companies create more female kindly business because it will help the movement of women into society.
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the number of young people who live with their parents will increase in the future?
INTRO:
The relationship between young people and their families are gradually changing compared with old days due to valaety factors such as social environments, developing of Internet, and so on. It is true that the number of young people that still stay with there parents after they finish their educations are increasing and this phenomena are becoming significant social issue in Japan these days. There are two reasons to support this opinion.
BODY1:
First of all, There is a data that shows Japanese young people’s marriage aspiration is decreasing. that may affects to decrease the opportunity to separate from their parents. Usually, people will separate from their parents when they get marriage and start their new life with new family member. However, people who don’t get marriage are tend to live with their parents because there is no need to be separate. Thus, according to this deta, no wonder that people who live with their parents is increase in Japan.
BODY2:
Next, It is true that there is the type young people that called “NEET” in japan. That means Not in Education, Employment, or Training. As this term shows, they are completely depended to their parents in many way and usually these kind of people live with their parents together.
CONCLUSION:
Accoding to these reasons I support the opinion that the number of young people who live with their parents are increasing in future.
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I need to send e mail to my teacher...
Hello, This is Yuuki graduated 20⚪︎⚪︎.
I would like you to fill up the recommendation of applying for ⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎ University as well as my sister.
If you have any questions or problems, please let me know.
I am sorry for making you busy but thank you for your supports.
p.s. This recommendation's due date is the beginning of October.
When you finish them, please send them to my address as well as my sister's recommendation. Thank you.
My address is
⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎⚪︎
sincerely,
yuuuki
if there are some mistakes, please correct em thanks!
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Please help me to collect the mail massage ><
Hello, This is ---name--- transferred from ---school name---.
I would like you to fill up the document that I attempted on this e-mail for applying to ---universities name---.
Would it be possible to send to each university that I'll put addresses below the document in the sealed envelopes and official stamps for each just like the transcripts as soon as possible?
Those documents have to reach them until the due date (8/20).
---addresses---
If you have any problem or question, please let me know.
I apologize for the trouble this will cause you, but I appreciate your kind cooperation. Thank you for your time.
---name---
Japanese ver.(just in case if it gonna help a little bit :v)
こんにちは。------から転校した------です。
このメールに添付した------に出願する為に必要となる書類を書いていただきたいと思います。
その際、下に記載したそれぞれの大学の住所に公式な判子を押し、厳封した書類をできるだけ早く送っていただけますでしょうか?
最終期限である8月20日には必ず各大学に届くようお願いします。
---addresses---
何か質問や、わからないところがありましたら、連絡ください。
忙しいところ恐縮ですが、協力のほどよろしくお願いします。
ありがとうございます。
---name---
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Sorry for long entry again but please help me to correct my essay ><
Conclusion
Nowadays, the religion became to handled as a taboo because of Tokyo Gas Attack. Even people who consider this case from a subjective perspective, they were denounced if the readers ascertained the essence of the individual is supporting Aum Shinrikyo, and trends removed socially. Also, it becomes the taboo even to report the injustice arrest of the believer by wrongfulness and something else and the petty offense of the exercise to expel a religious community because even a scholar and the media are afraid that it blamed that people may think that they are supporting a religious community. It is a problem that expensive exercise of such a religion is left in now when 21 years passed after the case. In late years, It is necessary to consider about this case, not only processing this case that is a precedent as a taboo because religion-related terrorism including ISIS becomes the problem once again and should keep the experience utilizes in the future terrorist attacks.
thank you.
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커뮤니티 가이드라인을 위반한 콘텐츠입니다.2016년 5월 5일
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What is proportionality in war and do you think it should be a guideline to follow?
I suppose it is not appropriate to put this sort of personal opinion here. But I really need to correct my mistakes in the paragraphs below. Please help.
There are still a lot of war or conflict all over the world even though "Just war theory" which is basically written about the guidelines including proportionality in war had been published. These guidelines have not seemed to bring a good result yet according to current conditions of war. Moreover, those war changes the name to "conflict" to get led of the guidelines of war.
First of all, what is proportionality in war? I suppose that is very uncertain because proportionality is very depended on situation and morality. Even though it is difficult to exactly define what is proportionality in war we can still consider about it. In an extreme example, it is unacceptable to use nuclear bomb and kill 10,000 non-combatant even though it's faster to end up the war because it is not simply morality and definitely it is not proportional attack, as well as other bombing. Therefore, I think it could be the most effective measures to decide acceptable range of proportionality in war. Otherwise strong countries become able to use the maximum power without any limit so war become more harder to assume damage.
secondly, I believe it should be a guideline to follow. Even though, it is difficult to make the guidelines that are effective for war, I think that can reduce damage by the war than nothing to limit. The damage by the war easily exceeds conjecture if we do not arrange some limit of the war in this time that the science evolves and the power of the weapon has begun to surpass human power.
In conclusion, I think we should reconsider guidelines of war once again before big war breaks out and it is necessary to understand the significance of existence of "Just war theory".
I'm afraid I might no be competent enough, so I look forward to your kind help.
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