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HELP ME WITH MY IELTS WRITING Some people think museum should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people.Other think the purpose of museum is to educate not to entertain.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Many people chose to spend their leisure time in visiting museums which provide cozy environment and entertainments, while other people consider museums as educational places.In my opinion, it is more important for modern museums to multiple their operation modes rather than just displaying items. With colorful display methods, a museum is more likely to attract young people.For example, in some science and technology museums,more and more people are attracted by the interesting high-tech inventions,such as 3D-printer and AI robots which can actively interact with the young visitors.In this case,they may have more opportunities to rich their minds in the museums. On the other hand, there is no doubt that one of the purposes to establish museums is to educate young people.Take some history or art museum for example,young people are able to learn more background knowledge about the displays directly through the original commentary written by the experts.Whereas the enjoyable museums are likely to distract young people’s attention from the historical and cultural significance of the precious items. Personally, I think it is necessary for the modern museums to arise young people’s interests through arranging more vivid exhibitions.The main reason is that people tend to learn things more effectively when they are in a enjoyable places.Thus the meanings given by the modern museums become profound, which may change the way that young people learn. In conclusion, although education is important to the aim of museums, people should pay more attention on how to make visiting museums fun, which can help young people learn more knowledge from the museums.
2015년 8월 22일
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some IELTS writing practice Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?  One benefit of improving students sense of citizens is that it can help to build a more steady and prosperous society.Students who are educated to be a good citizens or workers may be able to take more responsibility and be more sacrificed in their daily life than the ones who think highly of individualism. For example ,the former ones are more likely to take part in volunteer organizations to serve people who are in need.Consequently, more people receive help and the crime rate declined. Another advantage of teaching children the importance of being a good citizen and worker is that they might be excellent young staff who have a good understanding of professional ethic and spirit of teamwork in the future.By working with others and think of others before themselves, their jobs are able to be done more efficiently and thus it is easier for companies to earning profit only because they have such sacrificed employees.
2015년 7월 26일
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Cement Garden I've totally addicted in McEwan's book recently.In fact,what make me most impressive of his works is the one named "The comfort of stranger".It's really an amazing horror story.About the "Cement Garden",it is the second story of him that I read.I haven't met any scary section yet and I really expect that hahahaaa~ Anyone else love the book?
2015년 7월 26일
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