POEM1 Hello, could you please correct my poem? ------------------ He thinks he´s a beast, a macho man… Says he can handle everything on his own. Psh… as if. All he really is it´s a kitten A kitten who´s afraid to take chances but yearns to be seen A kitten who plays these wicked, self-deprecating games time and time again with his own destiny A kitten who hasn´t figured out himself and has no sense of purpose…yet A kitten who´s breaking on the inside A mess The grass has died on his side or so he thought? He´s hurt, can´t you see? Hold him up, caress him. All he really is it´s a kitten, a kitten that needs a little bit of guidance and love and care.

TINDER STORY TIME Hello, could you please correct my entry? ------------ I made an account on tinder for the sake of stepping out of my comfort zone and doings things I´ve always been afraid of such as dating so… I had my very first date with a guy I met on this app and arranged a meet up via email since I lost my mobile phone at the time. It was definitely quite a unique experience. He was in the initial stages of dating as well, sort of an extrovert, pretty hilarious, decent and I happened to have such a massive crush on him to the point that there was a distinct lack of eye contact during the date but things somehow worked out well anyway. Then the quarantine thingie happened and we couldn´t arrange a second and naturally he lost interest over time which is a pity since I still fancy him (hopefully he´s not reading this). Here are some tips I learnt after the date I had with this guy: 1. The initial stages of dating can be really awkward but it´s okay. Your very first dates help you learn basic dating and relationship skills plus you’re not compatible with everyone and… these very same people you dated in the very beggining help you figure out your standards. 2. Do not and I repeat, DO NOT interiew your dates and forget to RELATE TO THEM. You have to be curious and ask lots of questions but at the same time, it is imperative to talk about yourself so that you both can bond and relate to one another 3. Be bold and find subtle ways to flirt if you do fancy the guy you´re with. Try your luck since you have nothing to lose anyway. 4. Do give your date a second chance because nerves can get the best of anyone at times.

SHORT Hello, could you please correct the paragraph below? I´ll be sharing a clip about one of the people I look up to still to this day. Aaron Swartz, an inspirational young American man, Internet hacktivist who ended up commiting suicide. What a great loss for mankind.

SHORT SENTENCE Hello, could you please correct what I´ve written below? Spread such joy that should shine in the hearts of those around you like the sun that enlightens this world. As today is a new day filled with blessings, rejoice and be glad.

Problems with fluoride administration - short Hello, could you please correct the two paragraphs below? One of the issues we faced was determining the right amount of fluoride concentration for children and for that we did extensive research to not go over or under board so as to avoid the development of fluorosis which occurs when excessive fluoride is ingested during the formation of the teeth. The other issue we faced was finding young subjects that actually wanted to refrain from eating fluoride rich foods such as grapes, potatoes, shellfish, spinach, raisins for two months straight so that they would become eligible for our baseline examination. Not every kid enjoys having dietary restrictions and fluoride is present in most of the foods we eat.

BRIEF POEM Hello! Could you please correct the poem below? Down by the sea I thank the Giver of our joys For my heart to feel at ease

Correction of a sentence Hello, could you please correct the sentence below? What really frustrates me though is that I´m in a position in which I don´t know how I´m supposed to bring about change in regards to problems of such magnitude.

China Hello, could you please correct the entry below? There´s a genocide going on in China, Uighur muslims -an ethnic Chinese minority- are being put in concentration camps where they have to deal with unbearable brutality just because they have a distinct culture and religion and are seen as a potential terrorist threat to the Chinese Communist Party. We´re talking about hundreds of thousands of people that are being interned AGAINST THEIR WILL and with NO CHARGES in these Xinjiang camps just because of their beliefs. They´re locked up in massive jails known as “reeducation schools or vocational centers¨ more like brainwashing camps where they are badly beaten and forced to do dreadful things that are meant to replace their cultural and religious identity and with no idea how many months or years it will be before they can return home. This is not to be tolerated, they´re getting away with it people! Let´s spread the word.