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Hi! could you please correct my letter about myself especially the (punctuation marks), thank you!

Introducing myself<o:p></o:p>

Hello! I would like to introduce myself to you. My name is Abdulrahman. I was born in Makkah, the Holy City in Saudi Arabia. I graduated from Umm-Al Qura University there. I studied Emergency Medical Services, and my favorite subject was cardiology. I was volunteering with Red Crescent when I was studying at collage. I don’t have a family yet, someday I may get married have children didn’t decide doing that or not, but for now, I’m a single person and I’m pretty happy with that. I can speak Arabic fluently and I’m good at English though I’m still in learning progress. I’m learning English because it’s the most use language in medical field. My dream is to become a successful doctor. I don’t have a special talents but, I used to draw when I was child but not anymore, right now I really want to learn playing some musical instrument, like guitar or piano. In my free time, mostly if it’s long vacation I try to travel somewhere, if it’s just a short free time during the day, I watch TV, play games, or go out with friends. <o:p></o:p>

2017년 2월 11일
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could you please correct this letter! Thank you Hello, could you please correct this letter for me, thank you.

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Dear Mr. Jackson,<o:p></o:p>

I am writing to you in order to clear some of the information, such as: the accommodation which we booked for you with Edward family. I will also explain about life in the city, so that you know what to expect. Hosted, and the feedback is very positive from the student who is staying there now. The house is located at the edge of the city, and you can get there by bus from<o:p></o:p>

You are the fifth exchange student the family has the seaport. That part of Britain is very sophisticated, and they live in a small villa. It is next to a beautiful park. There are some very good language institutes.<o:p></o:p>

I want to till you about the existence of a mosque in the same neighborhood, and there are a number of Muslim communities are holding weekly meetings, so I hope that you join them until you feel the Islamic brotherhood and away from you a sense of alienation.<o:p></o:p>

As for food, there are many restaurants in the area, but most of them are unhealthy. The family will cook for you if you want, it’s your choice.<o:p></o:p>

As for your questions about transport, the university is too far to walk to. There are buses and metro. I’m sending a link to a map, so you can see how the city transport system works.<o:p></o:p>

I hope this information helps. I’m preparing an information pack for you, including the forms which you need to complete.<o:p></o:p>

Yours sincerely,<o:p></o:p>

Mission Management, UQU <o:p></o:p>

2016년 10월 22일
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Which one is correct for the nickname: Manni, Manny, Manie, Manne, and what is the pronunciation?
2016년 4월 28일
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My travel experience Hello, I really want to see the world for long time and last month i decided to start my journey. I planned to travel to Malaysia and Bali first. I was looking for someone to travel with me but, people are busy and have work, so i couldn't wait them and i traveled solo. It was a wonderful experience. I visited much places. I met one local person and he took me with his motorbike to discover his city and tried the local food, also i met other tourists from England, Germany, South Korea and we went for dinner and discovering the area around. I was taking different tours and meeting people there. like i had taken two bicycle tours, cooking class, kayaking, and private tour. People were so friendly and always smile and that's made me feel happy. My accommodation was various, I stayed at hostels for some nights then moved to hotels and guest house, then back to hostel. I like the diversity in the places of staying but i prefer hostels because the chance is bigger to meet more people. Also sometimes i like to go to luxury hotel to enjoy the silence and quiet atmosphere. I feel happy while i am sitting now and listing to this Arabic traditional music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvZLlJpyDyc and remembering my lovely moments in this trip. I enjoyed my trip and have learned things a didn't know before. I'm in love with cities I've never been to & people I've never met. Thank you.
2016년 3월 7일
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