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please give me a correction I recognize a girl whose father has lived in Acomerica for many years and obtains "Green Card". Her mother is permited to reunite with her father.She is wating this news in the country that her mother take her to go aboard, unfortunately, the waiting news is that you will have a litter brother.Birth of new life，all people ignore her coming. More than a year later, she transferred to study abroad，Touching the new furnitures and seeing never meet the father，she find that her-self is the only stranger in this family. The bigest problem is language. she never learn any language in the country,the level of english is equivalent with a ordinary the age of seven child, the introdution of herself is stumbling，let alone she can understand the content in class. Thanks to the mild of the teacher, she has the experiment of teaching emigrant ,she give a pen to her and let her to draw casully.

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is this sentence right? The day is good. i will regret if i do not enjoy it.（今天天气这么好，我要是不晒晒太阳，我会后悔的）

Start with women of volleyball Hearing that girls of volleyball trained long time, they were too tired to want to cry.our fans feel so love. we expect to see them in Rio Olympics stadium. After obtaining champion of world cup in early September last year,Chinese Women of volleyball team have not appeared in the race for half of year,we are so miss them. As we known, some technique of true fans watch the classical matches of Chinese Women of volleyball team over and over again . Another three days, in other words this saturday,Chinese Women of volleyball team will attend the match in BeiLun of china,The opponent is Janpanese Women of volleyball team who are preparing the match of Olympic Qualification Tournament,there are 3 dual meet, After the first match in BeiLun on 23 April. the next two matches will move to ShenZhen.

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spring coming late I live in the North of china, there is cold almost all year,About april, The spring is coming,the trees get green,The flower are blooming. yesterday evening ,I palyed volleyball with my paterners ,when we reached the Volleyball court, There are many students. I dont konw how to write....

A busy week This week,I am surrounded by a lot of tasks.For completing my paper,i must read plenty of literatures and stimulate my inspiration to obtain my theory module about my experiment,This task is so difficult for me, because this is the first time to write paper in English, it puzzles a lot. However,to my delight, i can do physical exercise, play badminton and vollyball. In the next week , The more efforts should do by me.