IELTS Writing task 2- Please Help :))) Hi guys, I'm currently preparing for the Ielts exam and I really need some feedback and suggestions for my writing part. Thanks :)) TOPIC: children in some parts of the world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. Some people think this as a positive change however others think this as a negative change. What do you think? The rapid growth of global economy has resulted in the improvement of people’s life quality in many regions. This means that children in some countries are growing up in a better environment with less stress and responsibility than that in the past. This phenomenon has aroused diverse opinions and personally speaking, I regard this as a positive trend rather than a negative one. First of all, less financial responsibility means less undue pressure and worries. Financial soundness in many families ensures the children a healthy living surrounding. In comparison with decades ago, the underage nowadays can live a happy and carefree life without having to go out and work to help the family. Moreover, they can receive proper education, which naturally secures them a more prosperous future. For example, a recent research by a Chinese social organization shows that 70% of the interviewed children mark their life as satisfactory. On the other hand, spoiled by their parents, children nowadays can get whatever they want by simply asking for it. For this reason, they are more inclined to be more dependent and do not value traditional ethics like diligence. What’s more, the new generation often grow up in a over-protective environment, resulting in them being more vulnerable and at risk when entering adulthood. A questionnaire organized by students from Sun Yat-sen university is a great illustration. The result shows that majority of the students lack knowledge of money management because they never learnt how to do it. However, these problems can be solved with proper parenting and education. All in all, less responsibility brings more benefits than harms for that children can have a better growing background and less burden.