A Paragraph for My Self-Reflective Essay This is one of the paragraphs for my self-reflective essay. I would really appreciate if you correct my grammatical mistakes for me! Thank you so much! Nonetheless, Moran warns that many young scholars study interdisciplinary before knowing much about disciplinary so that they can accomplish none of disciplines (166 - 167). In other words, studying the individual pieces of literature before intertextualizing them altogether clarifies my own achievements. This resembles Dr. McCoy’s advice for my first essay, which suggested, “You cannot step on D before starting step C.” From her advice, I learned that my process of writing needs to go through singly as the intertextuality does. It also reminded me of my weaknesses, which I tend to unintendedly skip several steps to write essays because I envision the goal too much. This weakness creates my thesis or arguments unreliable. Indeed, improving the process of my writing is my future task for my academic career.

A few sentences for my essay Hi, does anyone correct my grammar mistakes for me? I am writing an essay, and I added a few more lines. Thank you ! Additionally, the characteristics of Father John at the end illustrates the influence of society. He seems to know more about the southern African American society because of the oldest character in Kabnis. Kabnis has not left from the basement of Halsey’s workshop for years, so he is socially incompatible. Albeit his blindness and deafness, he repeatedly speaks “sin.” His fragmental words are thrown away and isolated because those words are heard by neither Father John nor Kabnis. Kabnis intendedly ignores and ridicule him to keep maintain his identity and autonomy because Father John does not know the current society. However, realistically he even cannot adjust to the society in which he lives. This threshold of his decision making results in the ambiguous autonomy. Indeed, Kabnis’ interaction with Father John also suggests the influence of society on his autonomy.