Please correct my composition of my english homework TvT Dear sir/madam: You has already lived in America for a year so you has certainly saw and touched lots of American living style. We hope you can gradually assimilate to American culture as well as be independent or self-supporting. Because people in America has equality of opportunity to success, however you are American or not should work hard and be self-reliance as the saying goes—"going from rags to riches". Even though many of the America traditional values are ideals that may not describe the reality of American life, they still influence almost every facets of American life. If you want living in America with respect, you has to act like us , think like us as well as work hard as us! I recommend, in accidentally, you must start finding a job, studying hard and working hard. Only in these ways i believe that you are going to be a respectable people in America. At the end of the letter, i would like to welcome you to America. Your sincerely, Eric Cartman.