Please Help Correcting My Writing - Part 1 Hi guys, i need your help for correcting my writing, thank you. One sunny day in October, i finally made decision to travel alone with no friends or family member and no plan to visiting anybody I knew. It was a spontaneous journey to went and saw beautiful island in my country that had been mesmerizing most people around the world, Bali. This island of god is on my top list as it provides a combination of natural beauty, uniqueness of the culture, and traditional delicious food. This was an important exploration for me as I had never been exploring a new place alone before. Raised in the violence situation within family since childhood, that kind of condition often kept me in fear for years of life and hold me back long enough not to having clear picture of who I am and what I want to do in life. I arrived in Denpasar and spent around one hour went to Ubud by car. There was a nice little villa in the midst of Banjar Sema Payangan village. On the way to my staying place, I could see the beauty of green and layered paddy field. The next morning, after took a good rest, I went to first destination ‘Campuhan Ridge Walk’. When did a walking approximately 3 kilometres on trackway surrounded by greenery and hills with unlimited blue sky above my head and the smell of fresh air, my soul was elevated to the new dimension of life which was “the freedom”. It was a moment when I felt became myself, and find new identity, courage, strength, and vision about life. After a long walk, I stopped by in a cafe nearby and drank pure coconut water. It was relaxing moment sitting there while my eyes spoiled by the view of rice field illuminated by the sun and lotus pond around the cafe. At other traditional restaurant or ‘waroeng’, I tried mixed rice Bali - one of culinary heritage - consist of rice, some different kinds of chicken cooked in traditional spices, and served with vegetables, and chili. Mixed rice or ‘nasi campur’ is a modern version of ‘nasi yasa’ which was made for Hinduism ceremonies, and symbolizing the prosperity. I was enjoying and appreciating my meal, as for me it was a cultural heritage served on a plate.

Please Help Me to Correct This Story Hi all, Would you please help me to give input/correction to this story? Thank you. Easter is one of important holiday in my country, and luckily I got couple days off from office. I had decided to visit my relatives, therefore I went to the western part of Georgia, my country – where they are living. At first, I went to the city where my older brother lives with his wife and lovely daughter. The distance from where I am living currently and the place they are staying is quite far, it took approximately four hours to reach the place. Finally, when later I met them, I was extremely happy to meet my brother’s family because I haven’t seen them for quite long time. The day after, we had visited our grandmother. Our grandmother lives alone in a beautiful village and I haven’t got chance to visit her since last year. On those days in the village, I really spent amazing time with my family. For me personally, I like village so much and I wish that I could stay for couple weeks even months there. Unfortunately I couldn’t do that because I only had few days off. Then, right now I am sitting on the bus heading back to my city. I delight to see the view from window, while sometimes I read my book – the one I found on village. I am hoping that I will finish reading as the trip will take around six hours.

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Would you please help me to give input/correction to this story? Thank you.

Easter is one of important holiday in my country, and luckily I got couple days off from office. I had decided to visit my relatives, therefore I went to the western part of Georgia, my country – where they are living.<o:p></o:p>

At first, I went to the city where my older brother lives with his wife and lovely daughter. The distance from where I am living currently and the place they are staying is quite far, it took approximately four hours to reach the place. <o:p></o:p>

Finally, when later I met them, I was extremely happy to meet my brother’s family because I haven’t seen them for quite long time. The day after, we had visited our grandmother. Our grandmother lives alone in a beautiful village and I haven’t got chance to visit her since last year. On those days in the village, I really spent amazing time with my family. <o:p></o:p>

For me personally, I like village so much and I wish that I could stay for couple weeks even months there. Unfortunately I couldn’t do that because I only had few days off. Then, right now I am sitting on the bus heading back to my city. I delight to see the view from window, while sometimes I read my book – the one I found on village. I am hoping that I will finish reading as the trip will take around six hours.<o:p></o:p>

 

Need Language Partner for French

Hello,

I am Grace from Indonesia. Currently i am learning French beginner level A2.1. I would like to find language partner to learn French and if you want to learn Indonesian i could help you.

Thank you.