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IELTS task 1 practice (2)
These two graphs below show the total number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in Korea in 2004 as indicated on the x-axis. The y-axis represents the surgery types taken by Korean men and women, which have some differences.
Hair transplantation was the most popular procedure performed on Korean men with a total amount of 60,000 and the least popular was facelift, which was just around 15,000. On the other hand, eyelid surgery was the most popular surgery for Korean women, an amount a bit higher than 300,000, which was five times over the number of men’s most popular surgery performance. Similarly, liposuction, the least popular surgery performed on females, had a number around 120,000 which was eight times higher than men’s least popular surgery and even double of men’s most popular surgery.
By looking through these two graphs, we can infer that taking cosmetic surgery is popular and normal for Koreans, especially for Korean women.
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IELTS task 1 practice
The graph above shows the changes in the birth rates of China and the USA through different years. X-axis represents the Year which is between 1920 and 2000 while y-axis is the birth rate from 0 to 25 percent.
The grey solid line belongs to China and the blue is the USA. We can learn from the graph that both countries had their highest birth rates happened in 1950 which is 20 percent for China and 15 percent for the USA. Although the two countries both faced a decrease of birth rate after the peak in 1950, the rate of China dropped more dramatically and had its lowest rate in 2000 which is the last year on the graph. Unlike the sharp downward sloping line of China, the USA had a more gentle decrease and didn’t break the record, so the lowest rate was in 1945.
By looking at the graph it is likely that the rate of China and the USA had similar varied direction. Also, the critical point for both countries in 1945 were probably because world war two had ended.
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my first practice for IELTS task 1
The changes for Japan’s travelling abroad tourists over a period of 10 years are shown by the bar chart, while the line graph shows the trend of percentage of Japan’s tourist going to Australia.
(After reading a description of chart 1, I cannot describe without thinking it so I skipped chart 1.)
On the other hand, two slight decrease in percentage of Japanese tourist going to Australia respectively happened in 1988 and 1993 while other years were up sloping on the line graph. Unfortunately, we do not know the exact time it took for the percentage to rise from 0 percent to 2 percent.
When we take a look at both charts at the same time. We can get a cross information by the number from chart one times the percentage from chart two, which is the number of Japanese tourists travelled to Australia.
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